The Comparison How to Educate Children
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Minggu, 23 November 2014
Comparison Text
Cause and Effect
Why EED Student feel
nervous When They Begin presentation
There are some factors and effects why
some EED students feel nervous when they begin presentation. First of all, most
of them think and feel afraid that their presentation will be bad, that’s why it
makes some students feel nervous. Second, they make less preparation of their
material that will be presented. Third, there are some audiences make some
noise and don’t appreciate them. Fourth, the lecturer looks fierce. The last
one is they are afraid that their lecturer will give them a bad score and a bad
comment of their presentation. On the other hand, from those factors it will
make some effect such as the presentation will be bad and they will get a bad
score, make student feel not confident, etc. that’s all about factors and
effects why some EED student feel nervous when they begin presentation. I hope
that EED student build more self confident especially in their presentation.
Prosedure Text
How to make Banana Split
Banana is delicious fruit, we can make various kinds of food .One of which is banana split.If we
make banana split we have to prepare the ingredient 1 scoop vanilla ice cream scoop chocolate ice cream, 1 scoop strawberry ice cream, hot fudge topping, fruit syrup topping of
your choice, whipped cream, cherries, nuts , 1 banana. Besides that we also prepare Banana Split Equipment such as oval ice cream bowl and ice cream scoop. If
the ingredients and the equipment complete, you can follow these steps. First
of all, unpeel the banana and cut it length-wise.
Second, p lace one half on either side of the oval ice cream bowl. Third, put a
scoop of each flavor of ice cream between the banana halves. Fourth, spoon hot
fudge over the scoops of ice cream. Fifth, use additional fruit syrups to your
liking traditional flavors such as strawberry and pineapple . Sixth, your banana split with a dollop of whipped
cream, a sprinkling of nuts and cherry. Finally your banana split is ready to
serve with garnish and you can enjoy it.
A Big Mistake In My Life
A Big Mistake in My Life
I had a fatal mistake that I won’t
repeat in my life. It happened when I was in Senior High School. At that time
my class got duty in flag ceremony, so all of my friends got their duty
included me and I got duty to put out the flag. After that, we started to d
exercise during one week, we worked very hard to get the best performance. On
Monday, before the flag ceremony held, we prepared and prayed to get the best
performance. Unfortunately, when the flag ceremony held, I did terrible mistake
that made flag ceremony became worst in my school. When I was put out the
flag, I felt strange because many students laughed at me and I saw teachers
stare at me very sarcastic .When the flag on the top of flagpole I realized
that the flag was upside down from red – white became white – red. At that time
I was really embraced and afraid. After that my teacher gave us a bad comment
and asked us to repeat again on the next week. I felt guilty because of me the
flag ceremony became mess, and I promise to myself that I won’t repeat same
mistake anymore. That’s all about my fatal mistake in my life.
Narative Text
Yuni’s
Frightening Incident
Yuni is student from class 3E .One day
Yuni got a frightening incident in her campus. At that time she got writing
class on KL period, she went to campus earlier than usual. When she arrived at
the campus, she didn’t see any employee or student, so she decided to wait her
class mate at the basement. Fifteen
minutes later her friend didn’t come so she went to classroom by her self. At
that time she tough that maybe if she went to her classroom she would find her
friend, but unfortunately when she arrived at the classroom she didn’t find
anyone. In the classroom, she sit down at the corner, she took a paper from her
bag and began scribble down on the paper. During she did that activity, she
felt strange because she heard someone cried near the classroom. After that,
she came out from classroom and tried to find someone whose cried until the
rest room. At the rest room she didn’t hear sound again, but when Yuni look in
the mirror, she saw strange girl with a black long dress, long hair, red eyes,
black lip, and pale face stood beside Yuni, she felt afraid, suddenly cold sweat
stream in Yuni’s face. When Yuni looked at behind, she didn’t see strange girl,
but when Yuni looked at the mirror, she saw strange girl. Strange girl said ‘’
help me, help me, help me please!’’
‘’
what do you want from me?’’ said Yuni
‘’help me’’ said strange girl with a blood
tears. During terrible situation Yuni couldn’t do anything until strange girl
disappear. After ward Yuni felt relief, and she run fast to classroom to take
her bag, with strange feelings Yuni decided to go home.
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